Below is a Sample LOE For Study Permit Refusal in Canada
To
The Visa Officer
High Commission of Canada
Sub: Application in response to study permit refused on 27/02/2022 (S304625585)
Dear Sir/Madam,
I express my kindest thanks to you for allowing me to reinstate my purpose of visit to Canada. I am a passionate student who wants to carve his niche around computers and IT programming. Being a problem-solver, I have always found myself inclined toward solving tech riddles and it gave me utmost satisfaction and a feeling of belongingness. Hence, I am determined to pursue higher studies in the same field. I have also received admission to study Diploma in Computer Programming from Seneca College for January 2023 intake Unfortunately, my last visa application remained unapproved due to the following reason:
- I am not satisfied that you will leave Canada at the end of your stay, as stipulated in subsection 216(1) of the IRPR, based on your history of having contravened the conditions of admission on a previous stay in Canada.
Therefore, I utilize this application as a medium to provide a valid justification in favor of my candidacy as a temporary student entrant to Canada.
Purpose of Visit
I am solely intending to visit Canada to pursue higher education in Computer Programing. As I am naturally fascinated by computers and reasoning algorithms that quench my thirst for learning, I am dedicated to carving a nice for myself as I step outside the college. My admission to Seneca College is a great motivation for me to stick to my educational goals and maximize my international exposure by studying abroad. I am thus eager to begin my studies and derive the best out of the Canadian education system that is highly acclaimed globally. My training in Computer Programing will broaden newer career pathways for me in my home country. Therefore, I wish to take full advantage of this opportunity to study in Canada throughout my stay.
Why Canada?
Canada is by far the most compatible study destination for me to pursue higher studies based on my financial, social, and physical conditions. It is the most affordable study hub which is also advanced and liberating considering the education system and pedagogical approach. Compared to other English-speaking countries like the USA, UK, or Australia, I found Canada to be fitting upright to my budgeting math. Also, I will have enjoyed rights as great as its citizens which talks about the country’s esteemed policies for international student immigrants. Also, Canada ranks seventh in the global peace index which assures me of a comfortable stay throughout my study tenure. Moreover, Canada has been recognized as the second-best country for international students to reap the benefits of quality of life. It certainly convinces me to pursue higher studies from such a place of higher values and morals where students are the center of the education system.
Why not India: By studying in Canada, I will reserve better career opportunities back home due to the globally accredited qualifications and international exposure. However, studying indigenously will generalize my studies due to following a theoretically inclined educational structure. Canada on the other hand involves a high-ended practical implementation of conceptual learning in its modest delivery methods. In my country, I cannot find a course with as much extensiveness as available with Seneca College. However, even if there are certain curriculum offerings available indigenously, those require students to meet the cut-off requirement which soars higher due to a large population count. Therefore, I have directed my educational goals toward the Canadian education system rather than studying in India.
Why Computer Programming at Seneca College?
While browsing through various curriculums in different colleges in Canada, I could finalize the one available at Seneca College. Also matching my study requirements with the course offerings made me more interested in further speculating about the college and its atmosphere. Upon researching further, I came to the realization that Seneca College is where I want to pursue higher studies due to its unparalleled track record of producing IT professionals with an overall success rate. I have also learned from its alumni that it is one of the most unbiased institutes that brings students from different communities together to find a solution to a common problem that initiates friendliness. As a result, I am sure to build great connections for a lifetime by studying ta Seneca College which builds a career and nurtures relations. Moreover, a small class-size ratio is what I desperately want to experience as I have never been to a small-sized class earlier. Dedicated faculty attention will be a rewarding experience for me. It certainly convinces me to choose Seneca College over and again, however, the inclusion of topics remains my top priority. Of all the subjects that I will study, Introduction to Object-Oriented Programming, Web Programming principles, Advanced Database Services, and Object-Oriented Software Development Using C++ interests me the most. This will outgrow me as a core IT professional and I would be prepared to integrate my learnings into an organized IT setup to further allow my career to take an impressive shape. I am, thus eager to begin my studies at Seneca College.
Academic and professional record
As I come from a privileged family that has spent voraciously on my academic nurturing. Since childhood, I have been a keen learner and an enthusiastic technology geek. As a result, I passed high school with an overall percentage of <add percentage> in 2019. Possessing an affinity for scientific subjects, I pursued senior secondary schooling in the science stream and passed the same with an aggregate percentage of <add figure>% in 2021. Although my academics have not been very impressive on the report card, I made sure that I am getting the best overall academic exposure. My father has also raised me to focus on overall personality development. As a result of my inclination toward technology, I represented my school at various interschool competitions. To keep me UpToDate with computer and web technology. I pursued a short-term Certificate Course in Computer application (CCCA) from October 2021 to December 2021. Also, to grasp programming fundamentals, I acquired a certification in Web Designing on 15 February 2022 and a certification in Web Programming on 10th April 2022. My exposure to these programs made me channel my efforts in the right direction to seek higher education in Computer Programming. The enthralling experience that I garnered through my active involvement in intellectual learning enhanced my academic exposure and boosted my learning beyond academics. Out of my enriching learning experience, I have concluded that by pursuing higher studies in Computer Programming, I will reserve lucrative career opportunities for myself. Hence, I am interested in pursuing this course at Seneca College.
Reasons to return to India
Family ties in India
I belong to a joint family in India which comprises my mother, father, grandfather, and brother. My father is a renowned businessman engaged in manufacturing Automatic Machine Tools used in the LPG bottling plant. His company ‘Brilliant Engineers’ is an empaneled vendor of Govt of India for supplying equipment to BPCL and HPCL/IOCL My mother is an entrepreneur holding a profitable wholesale business in cosmetic and beauty products. My brother is an engineering student pursuing studies at one of the finest colleges in India. My grandfather is a retired professional from Haryana Electricity Board who is now enjoying his retirement days comfortably with us. I have shared a major portion of my life with my family members which have made us share very strong values as well as bonding. Like my parents, grandfather, and brother have stood by me through all thick and thin of life, I wish to be with them as and when they need my support. For this, it is critical for me to accompany them to India. Also, being one of the eligible heirs of our widespread assets, it is imperative that I return to my country to take care of our family’s riches. Moreover, I wish to be on my parent’s side as they grow older and ensure they have my exclusive support similar to what they are supporting my grandfather. I do not possess any family ties in Canada; hence, I will have all reasons to return to my closest family ties in India.
Future Plans
India has the largest IT talent pool. I certainly want to add to it with my exclusive international exposure and an advanced qualification from Canada. Today, compute programming serves as the backbone of any industry, be it finance, retail, commerce, or SMEs. Everywhere businesses remain dependent on IT professionals. India being a rapidly evolving economy would require robust professionals and the job market will be ever blooming. Hence, after completing my course in Canada, I wish to return to my country and associate myself with IT giants such as Infosys, Wipro, HCl Technologies, Hexaware Technologies, L&T, etc. By working with top-notch IT firms, I will elevate my professional expertise and reserve a better chance to fulfill my long-term career goal which is to establish an independent IT consulting firm. Through my gained knowledge and enhanced expertise, I would seek profitable business expansion catering to a global market as India will continue to remain the most affordable destination for IT outsourcing in the modern business world.
Conclusion
Declaration of funds: I belong to a financially affluent family that possesses sufficient wealth to cater to my educational requirements abroad. Our residential house is valued at CAD 179850, my father’s agricultural land is valued at CAD 330000, my father’s factory’s value is CAD 495000, and my mother has a piece of land in her name worth CAD 288750. Moreover, my family possesses approximately CAD 26400 saved in the national bank(s). Also, I have a fixed deposit of CAD 8250 in Axis Bank in India.
Considering our strong financials, my parents have agreed to sponsor my studies in Canada. As a result, I have also paid one year’s tuition fee of CAD 15,710 and deposited 10,200 into the GIC account. My family is stable enough to support itself as well as offer support in case I incur any additional expenses during my stay in Canada.
Language Proficiency: With my overall IELTS test score of bands 7.0 with no band less than 6.0 (Listening – 8.5 Reading – 6.5, Writing – 6.0, Speaking – 6.5), I have proven my proficiency in the English language. I am sure that language will not become a barrier to communication for me in Canada.
Oath: This is the first time that I will be traveling out of my country for studies. Hence, I am requesting this visa grant to benefit from the most advanced educational system that Canada offers. Based on my awareness of Canadian Immigration Rules, I will exhibit amicable behavior and act under the law. I understand that I need to represent myself as the most befitting example of an international immigrant who has committed to fulfilling his study aspirations in Canada. By no means, I will extend my stay period in Canada beyond the authorized period while during my stay, I will add to the country’s rich multicultural heritage. I, therefore consider myself a genuine temporary entrant so that I can accomplish my education objectives abroad.
Yours Faithfully,
Karan Choudhary
